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Bring me the horizon.

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Photographer:Me
okay so well i know that the title is pretty cliche` but deal with it :)

if you :+fav: please comment it first i just want to know what you think of it :thanks:
it isn't a drawing nor a painting.
Image size
500x524px 257.85 KB
Make
GEDSC IMAGING CORP.
Model
A735
Shutter Speed
1/1911 second
Aperture
F/4.7
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
80
Date Taken
Mar 27, 2000, 12:06:51 AM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I've just been looking at a photo of someone lying on long green grass under a blue sky, and now I see this - the end of a perfect sunny day!

I'm impressed with the tonal range you've captured. The detail of the surface of the sea creates a wonderful texture and the clouds look like cotton candy. I like that the horizon line isn't smack-bang in the middle of the frame too.

I don't know what the original full-frame version of this looked like, so perhaps my suggestion won't be relevant. I would love to see this cropped every so slightly differently so that the sun falls in the (vertical) centre of the photo. I think that would enhance the way the eye is drawn inward towards the sun.

I'm trying to find the words to explain that drawing of the eye inwards but nothing seems right. The closest I can get to is 'delicate vortex'...and I hope you understand that I mean that as a compliment.

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